Have your brain and heart fight ever? My brain and heart fought a lot of time. Now, I'm going to tell my unforgettable fight. I was taking a final exam when I was 13 years old. I sat in front of teacher's desk to concentrate on my test. My friend sat next to me and she said that I had to share my answers with her. It was unbelievable. My homeroom teacher was standing in front of me and one parents were standing behind the desk. Nobody could share their answers during the exam. The final exam started. My heart and brain started to confused me.
My heart was in positive side which is don't give my answers to my friends. I haven't copied other guys answers during the exam. She constantly asked about the answers and my eyes were staring at my exam paper. If I show my answers, my grade would be bad and harm to me. My heart became confused and dizzy. My teacher was still staring at me and my friends were calling and asking about the questions.
On the other hand, my brain said that I have to share my answers with my friends. If I don't share my answers, my relationship will be bad and she would hate me. My brain was going to say the answers to her. I could concentrated on my work. My brain made a decision that I need to change my seat. I stood up and said to teacher that I will go to another seat.
Sometimes, everyone get in trouble because of our distress. I felt that I have to make a decision very well when we think about what is right way.
Nakyung:
ReplyDeleteYour story was really well expressed and I felt your pain. However, you mixed up the heart and brain. Your heart would be the one who wanted to give the answers because you love your friend and want to keep that friendship. It is your brain that would be telling you what is right and wrong. In the end, you did listen to your brain and moved because you wanted to do the right thing. Anyhow..I am okay that you mixed those up and you wrote very well.
I like the revisions you made with your hooks and smoother introductions in all your blog entries. I have really enjoyed your stories and the spirit you bring to them. However, when you write, never tell your audience that you are going to "talk to them about" "tell them about" etc. Please remove the part where you say, "Now, I'm going to tell my unforgettable fight." It isn't necessary and isn't good writing.
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